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The repeating question "Is this how the Republic dies?" hits hard as a refrain. I really like how you structured this almost like a protest song, with the verses building on each other about deception and corruption. Back in college I was in a folk music group and we did alot of political stuff but nothing this direct. The imagery about masked marching boys and corroded justice scales is vivid, though honestly its pretty bleak without offering much hope.

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